1. Review Text
What is review text
1.
Definition
Review is
one of text genres. This classification of text types is commonly based on the
structure which used by the writer to compose his text. Each text type will
have different form of generic structure. As I said in my previous post, review
text usually has generic structure as:
2.
Generic
Structure
Introduction: it is the
highlight of the general description about what will be reviewed. It can be
product, services which want to be sold, or just a site which want to be known
publicly. Then it will drive more traffic into the site.
Evaluation: the
second phase is coming inside into the product in details. It states the parts,
uniqueness, quality of the product which will be known publicly. However too
much detail description will “teach” the will-buyer and it does not sound good.
Evaluating as far as necessary for the targeted buyer is more genuine. The term
of evaluation will not be far from simple word of good or bad. In this phase
reviewer will apply much evaluative word, valuable, useful, worthy, etc.
Interpretation: after
writing about the objective thing of the product, it is the time for reviewer
to write about what he thinks or impresses on the product. Of course this phase
can be done after getting enough evaluation on the product. It is personal idea
about the product. Frequently to support and strengthen his idea or impression,
a reviewer describes a comparison to other similar product. He states in which
side the product has additional value or honestly admitted that the product
lacks value in certain side.
Summary: this
phase is recommending conclusion for reader of the product. After clearly
explanation, a reviewer will make a final comment whether the product is
valuable or not for targeted buyer. This phase is the worth of the review for
reader.
3.
Dominant
Language features:
1. Focus on specific participants
2. Using adjectives
3. Using long and complex clauses
4. Using metaphor
4.
Examples
and structures of the text
Harry Potter: Order of the Phoenix |
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Pengenalan /
Orientasi
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I absolutely love the Harry Potter
series, and all of the books will always hold a special place in my heart.
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Evaluasi 1
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I have to say that of all of the
books, however, this was not my favorite.
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Evaluasi 2
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When the series began it was as much
of a "feel good" experience as a huge mug of hot cocoa. The stories
were bright, fast-paced, intriguing, and ultimately satisfying.
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Tafsiran
(Interpretative recount)
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Order of the Phoenix is a different kind of book. In
some instances this works...you feel a whole new level of intensity and
excitement by the time you get to the end. I was truly moved by the last
page. Other times the book just has a slightly dreary, depressing feel. The
galloping pace of the other books has slowed to a trot here, and parts of it
do seem long, as if we're reading all about Harry "just hanging
out" instead of having his usual adventures. Reading in detail about
Harry cleaning up an old house, for example - housekeeping is still
housekeeping, magical or no, and I'm not very interested in doing it or reading
about other people doing it.
A few other changes in this book
- the "real" world comes much more in to play rather than the
fantasy universe of the previous books, and Harry has apparently been taken
off his meds. I know that he had a lot to be grumpy in this book, especially
with being a teenager and all, but the sudden change in his character seemed
too drastic. He goes from being a warm-hearted, considerate person to someone
who will bite his best friend's heads off over nothing. It just seemed like
it didn't fit with his character, like he turned into a walking cliché of the
"angry teen" overnight.
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Rangkuman
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The "real" story seemed to
happen in the last 1/3 of the book, and this part I loved. I actually liked
the ending (and yes, I cried!) as sad as it was. It packed a punch and it
made me care about the story even more. Still a really good book, with some
editing it would have been great.
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Example of
Review text
A. Zenni Optical; a site for eyeglasses
Eyeglasses
will become more and more important. It is not only because for protecting our
eyes from the hot light but also for holding the trend. There are a lot of
online sites which provides products of eyeglasses but Zenni Optical was on FOX news! is just the
perfect one.
If
we visit the site, we will easily catch various information about eyeglasses.
The site is quite simple but very informative. It is real, easy and not complicated
design. With quick loading this site will bring us quickly in to what we want.
There is
information about Variable Dimension Frames From Zenni.
Titanium, aluminum and rimless frame are available. The eyeglasses are designed
for different users. Eyeglasses for children, woman and man are available
choice. Again, what makes it different is this site gives the Great Eyeglasses For Less cost. The
product can be sold in cheap price because it has cut the marketing link. It
straightly goes to the end user.
B. Good Translation
Translation
is transferring not only words by word but also message to message. In certain
case, it will be quite difficult to make translation. How is to make good Arabic translation from English phrase of
“as white as snow” meanwhile there is no snow in Arabian?
The
basic requirement of a good translator is mastering resource and target
language with all non-linguistic aspect . If he is an English translator and
wants to make Hindi translation, he
should understand well the language and aspect of India. Similarly, if he works with Farsi translation, he has to be familiar
with linguistics and non-linguistics of Farsian.
However,
translation providers can bridge that difficulty. The translation experts, such
as India translation will
help to fix the problem. The experts who have grammatical, lexical,
sociolinguistics specialization will match in transferring the message from one
language to another language.
C. Recording Mommy Journey
Life
itself is a journey. For Rosemarie, a pretty young Filipino single mother for 2-year
kid, the daily activities are worthily documented. The site is her effort to
record of what she did, does and will do daily.
The site consists of several topic; family, motherhood, shopping,
money, love fashion and shopping. These topics are close related to her own
life. She is not only young but also pretty and she has a kid. These topics
will be useful to her. Rosemarie is also interested with making money,
internet, business, computer, loan and other interesting stuff. She is a widely
knowledge mom.
The
template design of her site is very girly, pink centered. She has arranged her
site very attractive, fresh and bright. Again, this physical appearing site
must represent her personal mood because she is a young and pretty mom. I like
this site and you, young mothers, surely will like the site too.
D. Good Young Mother
It
is about a young mother. It has a title of yummy mummy. This blog is
representative of her idea of becoming young mother. He pours her thought and
opinion on this blog in relating her position of a mother of kid and a wife of
a husband. Beside that, she is trying to monetizing it
This
blog has fresh physical appearance. She choose green border of her template.
She is young therefore she has to have a blog look fresh and energetic. She
looks to have strong care to her baby that is why we find her monthly calendar
of feeding milk to her baby attaches on the header of the blog.
She
is not only a good mother for her baby but also a good wife for her husband.
She expresses it in her post labeled wedding anniversary. It is a romantic
scene. In the last she is monetizing this blog. It must help her husband
support financially the family. It is really a reference blog for every young
mother and wife.
E. Recommended Software Applications
Software
application have grown to their density. A lot of softwares have been offered
to us. They claim that they are the best product. A buyer is really a king.
He/she has so many choices to select which he/she likes most. In one side, this
phenomenon present us comparable software products but, in the other hands, it
make us complicated to choose.
Due
to this complex phenomenon of consumer, a review site
is necessary. It will be a recommending bridge between consumer and producer. A
good reviewer will place hes/her self in the middle arena. He/she will not tend
to specially software producer or absolutely consumer. He/she just presents the
real description of the product. He/she will observes to find the good and bad
side of the product. In the last, he/she will recommends whether the reviewed
products deserve to choose or not. That is really helpful for consumer.
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